Thursday, 16 May 2013

book pt 2

here is pt two of my book that i wrote
The flames of blood
Steve lions sat on his sofa with his son, after the dance he got fired from his job and was charged with manslaughter, but he did not care because he had his son back. When he saw the knife fall from the sky and slam into the window: causing mini arrows of glass to fly into the living room slashing the flesh on their arms. Steve’s son staggered to the phone and called 999 and then passed out.
When Steve awoke he was in a hospital bed, he reached for some water and saw that his arm was gone. He looked around and saw his son with cuts all over his body and doctors rushing around him. A doctor came over to him and said “you are very lucky to be alive, but your son is in a very critical condition” “let me go I must help!” Steve screamed and ran from the bed.
When he got to his house there were police everywhere, he managed to get into the house and saw the knife in the floor, soaked in blood and with a message cut into the blade it said “flames of blood”. Steve ran from the house and saw people with knives on their shoulders running in the woods outside the house, Steve ran after them.
He managed to tackle one of the people and he screamed at him “WHY THE HELL DID YOU DO IT, WHY DID YOU KILL MY SON!” the man squirmed and cried, on his chest plate was an image of a knife stabbing into a cow, Steve removed the man’s mask: on his face were knife marks but when Steve looked back he saw they were making the shape of swords. The man pulled out a tablet and dissolved it on his tongue, Steve could hear a noise like fizzing and when the man opened his mouth his tongue was gone. The man was of no use to Steve he left him and ran.
Steve arrived at a camp in the forest and saw nothing, as he walked he saw the people darting around the camp all holding knives, he walked on, he needed the man who killed his son and when he finds him well only Steve knows. When he found him the man said “I am the fire and the heat and the burning” as the man spoke Steve saw that he had no tongue. He threw knives at Steve and he got out of the way. Then the man lunged at him and fell into the pit where the tongue burning acid was stored. His flesh melted away and his body was destroyed.
After the gang’s leader died the gang saved Steve’s son but the trial for manslaughter still stood. Steve went home and awaited his trial with his son.

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